viernes, 4 de septiembre de 2009

a country I would like to visit

I wish I could travel around the world at some time of my life and I would like to visit Europe and exotic places in Asia... but I really want to visit France, because people that has visited this country has told me that it's espectacular, the best place in the world... they have also told me that you MUST go with your couple, cause Paris it's the most romantic city in the world.
I would like to visit Greece too, to know a totally different place and culture, I think it's really exciting and they also have delicious food.
When I finish my program or while I'm studying, I will go to Europe, and I would visit as many places as my pocketbook will allow. Now I just have to save money, cause this trip is not that easy, it means a loooot of money and a lot of work. I really hope that this plan works, because it's one of my golds in life, I think it's great knowing other cultures and other people.
Meanwhile I should focus on my studyies, enjoy this awesome years and, of course, cross my own country, that way I can say that I've visited every city of my little world.

7 comentarios:

  1. I also want to eat all of differents foods on the world :P

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  2. greece!
    so nice..
    it comes to my mind the film "mamma mia" xD

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  3. My sister go to france two weeks and she told me that I have to go. She have a lot of fun there!.. You must save money and I will go with you!!!

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  4. I can speak a little french and understand it, but just barely ajjaja
    nice choise valentina, i would like to visit france too, maybe we can go together
    peace!

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  5. Nice response Valentina,

    I have to say of all the places you mentioned I would like to know Greece. All of the history, the Acropolis, etc. But France would be nice too.

    Anyway, here are a few grammar comments:

    --go as a couple, not "with". If you say with it sounds like you are going with 2 other people.

    --"...Paris it's the..." should be "PAris is the.." You don't need two subjects before the verb.

    --studies, not studyies

    --"this awesome years" needs to be "these awesome years"


    Take care

    Joe

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